If the nails are weak, your house will collapse. If your verbs are weak and your syntax is rickety, your sentences will fall apart.
William ZinsserPeople and places are the twin pillars on which most nonfiction is built. Every human event happens somewhere, and the reader wants to know what that somewhere was like.
William ZinsserOne of underestimated tasks in nonfiction writing is to impose narrative shape on an unwieldy mass of material.
William ZinsserExamine every word you put on paper. You'll find a surprising number that don't serve any purpose.
William ZinsserMy commodity as a writer, whatever I'm writing about, is me. And your commodity is you. Don't alter your voice to fit the subject. Develop one voice that readers will recognize when they hear it on the page, a voice that's enjoyable not only in its musical line but in its avoidance of sounds that would cheapen its tone: breeziness and condescension and clichรฉs.
William Zinsser