I don't want my readers slowed down by long passages of narrative.

You should see me work my magic in leather" Ranger

I shot that sucker right in the gumpy." Grandma Mazur

From the look on your face, I'd say you know him." I nodded. "Sold him a cannoli when I was in high school." Connie grunted. "Honey, half of all the women in New Jersey have sold him their cannoli

I want to be there when you get Cubbin. And I don’t want to be left out of the television show either. Little people are sexy now. Have you seen Game of Thrones? We’re hot.

Since I write in first person and have no idea what goes on in men's heads.

If I let her in I'm doomed. It's like inviting a vampire into your house. Once you've invite them in, that's it, you're good as dead!