Transitions are critically important. I want the reader to turn the page without thinking she's turning the page. It must flow seamlessly.
Janet EvanovichIt was dark and raining, with bad visibility, but this was Jersey, and we don't slow down for anything.
Janet EvanovichValerie was crying, too. She was laughing and sniffling back sobs. โIโm going to marry my snuggy wuggums,โ she said. Morelli paused, his fork halfway to the roast chicken platter. He slid his eyes to me and leaned close. โIf you ever call me snuggy wuggums in public Iโll lock you in the cellar and chain you to the furnace.
Janet EvanovichI'm underrealized," Lula said. "I gotta lot of untapped potential. Yesterday my horoscope said I gotta expand my horizons." "You expand any more in that dress, and you'll get yourself arrested," Connie said. -- Twelve Sharp
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