I was always mortified.Didn't they know they were tying thier mothers to the ground? Weren't chains ashamed of their prisoners?
Janet Fitchshe was such a bad actress. she never said her lines rite, it was something perverse in her nature. and wat was her line anyway?
Janet Fitchsheโs not as pretty as you,โ I said โBut sheโs a simpler girl,โ my mother whispered.
Janet FitchAlways tell us where we are. And don't just tell us where something is, make it pay off. Use description of landscape to help you establish the emotional tone of the scene. Keep notes of how other authors establish mood and foreshadow events by describing the world around the character. Look at the openings of Fitzgerald stories, and Graham Greene, they're great at this.
Janet Fitch