Don't improve it into a flop!
Pictures were made to entertain; if you want to send a message, call Western Union.
My wife's hands are very beautiful. I'm going to have a bust made of them.
Here I am paying big money to you writers and what for? All you do is change the words.
We want a story that starts out with an earthquake and works its way up to a climax.
Ill give you a definite maybe.