Give your main clause a little space. Prose is not like boxing; the skilled writer deliberately telegraphs his punch, knowing that the reader wants to take the message directly on the chin.
William SafireA reader should be able to identify a column without its byline or funny little picture on top purely by look or feel, or its turgidity ratio.
William SafireSome handsome and ambitious men believe they are above all morality, and a woman's virtue becomes a mere challenge to them.
William Safire