I see this with experienced writers, too: They worry so much about the plot that they lose sight of the characters. They lose sight of why they are telling the story. They don't let the characters actually speak. Characters will start to dictate the story in sometimes surprising, emotional, and funny ways. If the writers are not open to those surprises, they're going to strangle the life, spark, or spirit out of their work.
Brian Michael BendisBefore the TV show of Jessica Jones, the response to Miles [Morales] is so overwhelming, and so constant, and it's been five years now. I can't even express to you how powerful it is on my end. It's overwhelming how much it was needed, that I didn't know that's what was needed.
Brian Michael BendisYou can't just have a fight scene. In my opinion, it has to be a character moment or story moment.
Brian Michael BendisOne of the things I like to do is people's hearts are on their sleeve, whether it's a good or a bad heart.
Brian Michael Bendis