So you shouldn't really flatter yourself that they want to be your buddy. They don't. Generally. They want you for some reason or other, and you just have to fend that off all the time.

Rewriting is a large part of the whole job. And get rid of stuff that's not working. Just pare it down until it's a beautiful thing you can hand in.

So, yeah, I think it had a major effect. I think in franchising younger people, it was just an idea that's never been trotted out before, but it makes perfectly good sense.

Well, a lead is the most important thing about the story.

Unless you're doing a feature piece, which is going to be longer, and you have more time to get into stuff.

And the most important thing you can do is learn to edit yourself. And then go back and rewrite.

It's gonna be short if it's news; put it at the top. Style's not an issue, just make it news.